final copy on the edge of the cliff

Task description: this is my writing that i did it is average but i think i could do better.Once upon a time there was a boy called Tupou. He was a very good boy. He jumped out of a plane and landed on a cliff edge. He was with his mum going to Australia but he got bored and decided to jump! Then he saw a giant giraffe then they became friends and tupou was stuck on the edge of the cliff so the giraffe came to save him then they got down to his friend’s house and then he introduced his giraffe then they went on a adventure then the giraffe came to my school

I introduced him to my principal Mr Burt and my teacher Mrs moala. Mr Burt said i am amazed because no one has bought a giraffe to him then he said that i needed a certificate.

on the edge if the mountain

 

Mr frosty and the bmx kid

 task description: this is about mr frosty and the bmx kid the bmx kid is 11 years old.

telling time

Task description: i am learning to tell time. 

god's bomb

Task description: today we are writing about gods bomb it is about god how he does a bomb.

chatting to god

 Task description: this is chatting to god  and there is a boy named the bmx kid he rode his bike to a mountain.

the boys bomb

task description this is boy bomb its about a boy and fake god.

laser cutter

 Task description this is my laser cutter pictures

solar system

 Task description: this is my solar system work it is very cool learning about planets.

magic number

 Task description: this is my magic number for week 7.

create: night light

 Task description: today we are doing night light and trying to understand the author's purpose.

reading a schedule

 Task description: this is my reading a schedule for week 7.

the sons of ma'afu

Task description: this is the sons of ma'afu its a book that took place in tonga.

cool facts

Task description: this is cool facts it is about the sun and stuff like that.

flying high 2

 Begin Writing Here:flying high. this is a story about flying high, it's a floating lady with some birds. She has bird cages that the birds have escaped  from. Then there was a disaster because there was a fire in the other room. Then it turned out to just be the fireplace. That's why the birds escaped because they saw the fireplace. and they got scared so they went super crazy and then they came back and  they lived in an old palace that looked so scary?

Then they went for a big look if it was actually the fireplace then they calmed down and had a sleep. Then they woke up and lived happily ever after.then they laid down with the lady and gave her a big hug then they had some food and then went back to bed and woke up the next day happy and then they had breakfast then they went for a big walk around some trees so the birds can fly up to the branches 

reading an array

 

flying high

narrative brainstorm

introduction to time

Task description: this is my work of learning time and trying to tell time.

night light

about me writing

Kia ora My name is Nate. I'm in year 4 and my teacher is Mrs moala. I enjoy playing with my friends Tupou Fateh and logan. I play rugby with my siblings and on the weekends I play bat down with my whole family.And i like spending all the time i can with my mum dad and sisters

multiplication

Task description: this my multiplycation of groups of this is good for me and my friends because its fun> 

Fiafia journal entry

his is fiafia night i was in the junior samoan group we went on stage 2nd and the senior kapa haka went 1st they were good i wore a lava lava 

a blank white t-shirt and a red necklace i was nervous because my friend masen said oh sorry it was a little embarrassing but i liked it and we did good i liked my performance then there was fourteen more performances  we sat down and we 

Liked watching the other groups they all did so so well then we went back to our changing rooms then our parents had to pick us up from the classrooms.  

this is fiafia night i was in the junior samoan group we went on stage 2nd and the senior kapa haka went 1st they were good i wore a lava lava 

a blank white t-shirt and a red necklace i was nervous because my friend masen said oh sorry it was a little embarrassing but i liked it and we did good i liked my performance then there was fourteen more performances  we sat down and we 

Liked watching the other groups they all did so so well then we went back to our changing rooms then our parents had to pick us up from the classrooms.  

ARL

Thank you arl

my rocket

once upon a time there was a rocket that took off in China.There was a countdown and it needed fuel and it got four major systems then it went to space and broke into pieces and they finally landed on the moon and the astronauts couldn'tbelieve They actually landed and made it to space. they saw the sun and earth and mars and also they saw jupiter.

daylight savings

Task description: this is daylight saving and it is a bit challenging because i had to right a bit and could'nt think of anything.

sun and time

Task description:this is sun and time and this is about maui and the sun and time.

shadows

Task description:this is shadow we use a paper plate and a big toothpick and every hour we went out and checked on it and we went to 2.30 pm

troublesome

Task description: this is my writing and it is challenging for me and i did it.

pip story

 Task description: hi this is a story of pip its a puppy he/she went to a dog university he failed and got kicked out then there was a lady that nearly got ran over.